WALT to elaborate our main idea
My mum is the best mum in the world because she makes my lunch. My mum takes us to the take aways and she lets us choose whatever we want. She gives me bikes to ride and she also lets me go to the beach with my friends and do some bombs.
My dad is my hero because he gives me money and disc brakes. He even takes me up south to have a swim.
I love coming to school because I will learn how to count money so if the shop rips me off I can tell them I know how to count and how much change I should have.
My nan is the best nan ever because she gives me lunch money. She even says I can go and play outside. We go to the beach and we also go to the pools.
My sister is the best sister because she gives me money and she lets me play games. I play black ops 2 online.